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THIRD DRAFT NOVEL AND SCRIPT COURSE - 12 MONTHS

Writing is very much about re-writing. This is where you will do extensive re-writing and editing and make your writing and story come alive on the page for the reader.

The Process

The first draft is where you find your characters and story.

The second draft is where you nail it down from top to bottom so that the story, character journey and theme work as a cohesive whole.

The third draft is where you focus on the writing and make every scene work for your reader.

Aim of the course

Take a great second draft and turn into a terrific third draft.

In every class you will get detailed feedback on your writing from your class mates and tutor until you make every scene work.

You will find your voice and make your characters and story come alive on the page.

How the course works

In the third draft you get detailed feedback on your writing from your class mates and tutor until you make your scenes work. You'll discover that detailed critical feedback and guidance makes all the difference to your writing and your story.

You will:

  • Do a step outline to fine tune your story and ensure the structure is sound.
  • Use detailed templates to analyse your scenes and writing in depth.
  • Learn how to give and receive critical feedback that will dramatically improve your writing and story telling ability.
  • Find your voice and make your characters and story come alive on the page.

By the end of the course

  1. You will have dramatically improved your writing and story telling ability. Your scenes, characters and story will “work”.
  2. You will have found your voice and made your writing, your characters and your story come alive on the page.
  3. Experienced the joy of seeing your writing engage and excite readers.
  4. Be well on the way to having your writing and story reach a professional standard.

COURSE DETAILS

Meets either two Saturdays per month from 2.30pm until 5.00pm or Tuesday's 6.30 to 9.00 pm

Submit 1,500 words to every class for feedback, which you polish and workshop until you get it right.

You may not necessarily workshop everything you've written in class, but you will have found your voice and be given detailed feedback about exactly what you need to do to make your story the best it can be.

Maximum class size: 8 writers.

Pre-requisite: Second Draft Course

Course fee: $3,295. Please contact Kathleen to discuss earlybird of $300 off and/or payment options.

Course Dates: Enter existing 3rd draft classes when you are ready.

HOW THE COURSE WORKS

The Third Draft Course is the most hands-on of all the courses. Before each class you will send 1,500 words in a word document to Roland and your fellow group members.

Roland and your fellow writers will read and analyse your work before class and give you detailed feedback in class.

By the end of each class you'll have lots of detailed feedback to work from. This will give you a clear idea and specific guidelines of what works, what doesn't and what needs to be done to take your work the best it can be.

You will then take the suggestions and re-write the piece at home and it will be reviewed again in depth, following the same process. You'll be amazed at how much your story and everyone else's improves during this process.

Please note. Before you give your work to an agent, publisher or producer you need to make your story as good as it possibly can be.

The third draft is where you really learn the craft of writing. The power of critical feedback is incredible.

However, please bear in mind that the process does take time to master.

By the end of the 12 months, your story may well need more work before it is ready to submit for publication. Depending on the nature of your story, your experience as a writer and your time commitments, the above process can take varying lengths of time.

Excellence is a commitment to completion.

By the end of the course,you may not necessarily workshop every scene in your story in class, but you will have found your voice and be given detailed feedback about exactly what you need to do to make your story as good as it can be and what you learn from the feedback will inform all your writing.

"The art of writing is the art of re-writing. Success depends on attitude and patience as you take it one step at a time. So much of writing is about re-writing, I never get it right the first few times. I'm of the school that it's in the re-writes that the story is born. It's a refiner's craft. As territorial as we are it is important to be challenged.” Tina Howe

Lucas Welsh, who completed his third draft, online.

"I cannot stress how important this process was, nor can I express how highly I valued Alex's input.  His linguistic skills were evident immediately, and with a few comments and suggestions, a section I once considered gripping seemed dull and tepid after I had transformed it into an irresistible collection of words conveying sounds, sights and smells the reader could connect easily with.  I could not have done such transformation without Alex's insights and help.  His detailed commentary and mark up of my work again left me with the glowing feeling that I had 100% of his attention.  The end result is a book.  My book!  Not long ago, this was just a spark of an idea in my mind. 

A spark which Roland, Alex and Andrew and the Writers' Studio team nurtured and guided to help me write a book which stretched my abilities well beyond what they were capable of at the outset.  Now armed with confidence, I know I couldn't have written a book of this quality without their help. 

Not only that, but Roland, Alex and Andrew have expertly guided my online course in such a way that I'm not timid about throwing it to the lions of the publishing world - I can cast my work out into the world knowing that I couldn't have given myself a better shot at success."

 

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